Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Starry Night Awe

At the end of the day
Out on the porch for a stay
Enjoying the cool, quiet, and peace
After a very busy day attended

Looking at the darkened sky
Full of stars passing by
Each one gives off a white glow
From thousands of years ago

There was one that was different
Logic says that is just a planet
Not knowing what it could be
Drew attention from me

Looking at the orange-red
Pulsating orb in the sky
Awed me with the creation
Of all the stars and planets

How do they stay there
Being put in space with words
God said and it was so
He holds them with his power

How many years and years ago
I don't know but they continue
Their glow and fill my life 
With awe and wonder

(Rhyme somewhat)

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John Freeman November 21, 2009 at 12:34 PM Well done Sara. We don't have to know, to love, that is the grandeur, of love's self. As I know you are, Iam delighted to be a part of such grandeur. It is Love's logical intention that placed all forms where they are, and causes them to behave according to love's intention. We humans are a different story, we have freedom of choice, and set on fire even the course of nature (James 3:6) with our very own tongues sometimes, to our own demise. Sincere, Love, Moses

Courtney Dyer November 17, 2009 at 9:29 PM Well done

Joyce Johnson November 17, 2009 at 1:37 PM If we are looking for magic, we need only look up to the sky on a starlit night. Lovely, thoughtful words. Thank you for your commentss. Love, joyce

Carrie Richards November 17, 2009 at 8:27 AM The miracles and the wonder of the skies....never ceases to make us ponder. Nice poem to read this morning! ~ Carrie

Jared Pickett November 17, 2009 at 6:40 AM Boy today is full of awesome poetry.....Excellent write Sara....

Doris Culverhouse November 17, 2009 at 5:51 AM good one

Andrew Crisci November 16, 2009 at 10:55 PM Great awe and wonder are displayed in this powerful poem. Creation is the reflection of God's magnificence, and what we see amazes us and fills us with wonder. The Universe is limitless, so should be our imagination. Thanks for sharing it on Poetry Soup.I have appreciated your comments. Love and light, Andrew.

Marty Owens November 16, 2009 at 6:42 PM Very Nice Sara...Enjoyed...Marty

Sue Mason November 16, 2009 at 6:17 PM LOL ... well rhyme or not, its beautiful writing you've done here, Sara !! We haven't seen much of the sky lately ... been stormy and rainy and there is a big one blowing in so .... I'll miss the meteor shower tonight ...

Colleen Bono November 16, 2009 at 5:18 PM very nice.You have soup mail.