Debbie Duncan Poet Free verse

Starry Night

As I sit just looking at the moon.
And I wonder are there others
like me way up there.

I admire the sparkling stars.
That gives light to the night.
Sometimes I think I could 
reach up and grab one.

Though I know not possible.
So here I sit and admire 
this very pretty starry night.

After all, I'm just a cat.   


Wed 3 pm 7/ 10/ 2013 

my desktop has a starry night & cat looking at the moon

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Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2015 at 11:51 PM sorry about Emie,dear. Hey, can you think of any poems of yours I may not have seen. I am going in circles looking for one!

Robert Andrew Lyle April 6, 2014 at 2:26 PM We are not alone I guess in this great universe. Not even cats. Great write Debbie thank you for popping by. Andy

Linda Jackson November 1, 2013 at 2:39 PM Lovely poem about the cat and stars. I love cats. very best wishes Linda x Debbie Duncan November 1, 2013 at 7:51 PM Thank you Linda ;}

Kelly Deschler August 9, 2013 at 9:33 PM Amazing poem, Debbie! I love this! It is like something that I would write myself. And, thank you for reading my poems, and for the great comments. I really appreciate it!

Don Johnson August 6, 2013 at 6:35 PM Love it i do ...interesting words so true... a puddy cats delight.... afraid of nothing but the great white shark:) hims bite much worse than his bark... Debbie Duncan August 8, 2013 at 8:32 PM thank you Don ;}

Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2013 at 3:12 PM no fred winning the lottery is not true. I made a series of Fred limericks one time and my mom got a kick out of them because her old guy friend is named Fred.

Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2013 at 3:11 PM this is really cute. I love the picture it creates and I can just see a cat trying to reach up to the moon! Debbie Duncan August 5, 2013 at 4:41 PM Thank you Andrea ;}

Cherie Thomas July 30, 2013 at 8:24 PM This was to cute,,, different ending. Enjoyed reading:) ty cheriex

Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2013 at 1:48 PM Oh...Debbie ---> Love it !!!! - Cute !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Debbie Duncan July 16, 2013 at 2:51 PM Thank you Anne ;}

Duke Beaufort July 13, 2013 at 12:19 PM I am sure there are cats on other planets. It must be true!

Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2013 at 4:25 PM a surprise ending. You have a very articulate cat.

Robert Pettit July 12, 2013 at 11:58 AM I had a cat years ago that tried to catch the lights from passing cars as the reflected light traveled along the wall. Good write. Debbie Duncan July 12, 2013 at 2:35 PM Thank you Robert ;}

John Posey July 11, 2013 at 8:10 PM Nice work, Debbie. Cats can be such lovingly weird lil creatures.... Jake

Poet Tacito July 11, 2013 at 9:07 AM Inspired by desktop art...fantastic! :) Debbie Duncan July 11, 2013 at 8:40 PM Thank you Drake ;}

Donna Jones July 10, 2013 at 9:29 PM They are mysterious creatures..who knows what they might be thinking? Nice poem.

Kim Merryman July 10, 2013 at 9:04 PM Nice personification, Debbie! Love, Kim

Toquyen Harrell July 10, 2013 at 5:32 PM Lol, cute one, Debbie! I like it. Debbie Duncan July 10, 2013 at 11:48 PM Thank you Toquyen ;}