Starry Night

Alone, star gazing in the midnight hour
             Surreal the vivid hues that cross the sky
             Starry worlds beyond my comprehension
             Perhaps a visit when at last I say goodbye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 6:07 PM
This is beautiful and perhaps metaphorical Barbara. Happy Valentine's day my friend! xxoo : )
Horne Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 2:01 PM
love this wonder-filled write. yes, it's truly awe-inspiring to look at the night sky & just think, isn't it?
Devonshire Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 1:29 AM
As Line said, you have a talent for capturing thoughts in a few well-chosen words, Barbara. Through a telescope, I've seen some very colorful nebula. Haven't seen the aurora borealis yet, but Venus appears bluish green and Mars red in the night skies here. Lovely! Hugs, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 9:40 AM
Thank you...glad you stopped by. BG
Messina Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 9:50 PM
What floats beyond the stars is something we all hope to see, and one day probably will. Fantastic little write, Barbara. ~Charlie
Gorelick Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 9:41 AM
thank you Charles... glad you liked it. BG
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February 12, 2019 at 7:52 PM
Wow - love this, Barbara. A FAVE for me. Such an awesome concise write. Beautiful.
Gorelick Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 9:43 AM
Thank you for stopping by.. IM so glad you liked it. BG
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