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Starry-Eyed

Eyes dazed I stroll and quiver low, enticed In liquid skyline’s twirl, a slow ballet to pirouette on fireglows that ignite. The meadow gleaming near as winds invite An April centerstage that glides away eyes dazed I stroll and quiver low, enticed. And high above the robins wheel their plight Where garland of stars drips as if to play to pirouette on fireglows that ignite. Drunk, hungry this breath, so far the height where scent of dreams, bursts forth in warm display eyes dazed I stroll and quiver low, enticed Small twinklers crown my head to wrap and slay each heaving sigh embroidering this day, to pirouette on fireglows that ignite. As wishful thoughts catch stardust of the night the firmanent climbs inside earthen clay. Eyes dazed I stroll and quiver low, enticed to pirouette on fireglows that ignite. Villanelles and Terzanelles Only Shadow Hamilton's Contest 7/27/2013

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Date: 8/3/2013 2:34:00 PM
A beautiful image adorned with very stylish words. Loved your style of making sensational view. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/3/2013 11:09:00 AM
You handle this form so beautifully.... That talent alone deserves your win.... Congratulations..... Hugs.... Jake
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Date: 7/30/2013 6:23:00 PM
A very lovely poem. You always use wonderful imagery. Great work.
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Date: 7/30/2013 2:35:00 AM
HI nette, congrats beautiful poetry my dear . shine on like the star i know you are *smiles* Ron
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Date: 7/29/2013 8:19:00 PM
love the imagery here Nette congrats on your win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/29/2013 6:32:00 PM
Intriguing Congrad's on your fine verse winning! Light & Love
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Date: 7/28/2013 8:03:00 AM
You capture the night like no other. Nette, the Poetic Night Queen. Insanely beautiful imagery here.
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Date: 7/28/2013 6:12:00 AM
Oh my, with this poem you can hold your own with the great classical poets.
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Date: 7/28/2013 3:37:00 AM
You must be magician,your pen is spellbinding.
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Date: 7/28/2013 12:34:00 AM
Hi, my very dear friend Nette! This is a very beautiful and outstanding write which I'm embracing it this afternoon. Truly and amazing talent you really have! Grabe & super! Thank you so much for sharing your precious gem and your wonderful comments on my poems. Once again for your support in my latest and everything! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 7/28/2013 12:18:00 AM
This poem exudes your talents completely my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing and incredible poem this evening! I do so love the last line, "to pirouette on fireglows that ignite." what a powerful and ingenious of a line! What a wonderful piece this is, Truly inspiring, I feel a poem coming on from this write, Great Work!!
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Date: 7/27/2013 7:42:00 PM
As my favorite songstress sang - 'Nobody does it better, how do you do the things you do?' - Tim
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