Starlong, My Mother

My name, is Starlong
In a far, far corner of the galaxy
I live, even today

Once upon a time
I was the creator
Of an entire solar system

At first, there was nothing to share
And because the planets were cold and dark
I was truly alone

As such, I began to crave
Their companionship
Devoid of warmth, though they were

Eventually, my flames brought them to life
And they called me:  Mother.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/10/2020 10:40:00 AM
Very sci-Fi! Congratulations, Bryan!
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Bryan Norton
Date: 7/10/2020 1:31:00 PM
Oh Thank you Kim. Yes, I do love my Starlong. If you didn't do so already, you're welcome to read the full adventures of Starlong, under my name on PS. Have a great day!
Date: 7/9/2020 1:24:00 AM
Tender yet powerful emotions of a motherly touch Bryan. A creative take on the theme. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Bryan Norton
Date: 7/9/2020 2:55:00 AM
Thank you. I appreciate your comments so much. Good luck with your poetry and all. Sincerely, Bryan
Date: 7/8/2020 10:45:00 PM
great emoting through your Starlong. congrats on your placement Bryan.
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Bryan Norton
Date: 7/8/2020 10:52:00 PM
That you, Jeanne. I really appreciate that. You may also like the filled out version of Starlong, also on Soup. Take care! Bryan
Date: 7/8/2020 6:43:00 PM
This is beautiful Bryan. Congratulations on your win. ~Maureen
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Date: 7/8/2020 10:54:00 PM
Thanks, Maureen. It's nice to be appreciated. You may also enjoy a much longer version of Starlong, also at Soup. Take care.
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