Kim Rodrigues Poet Triolet

Starlit Dream

The lyre and moonlight cascading.
   Tri-dancer transposes shadow.
      On tiptoes, gracefully gliding,
The lyre and moonlight cascading.
   The artist’s pen twirling, shading
      His starlit dream…a stellar show.
The lyre and moonlight cascading
   Tri-dancer transposes shadow.

1/29/2022

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Debra L Brown February 12, 2022 at 12:39 PM Congratulations on your win Kim. Blessings ~ Debra Kim Rodrigues February 12, 2022 at 2:26 PM Thank you, Debra!

Suzanne Delaney February 1, 2022 at 4:46 AM A dance of words so beautiful and cascading. Congratulatiions. SuZ Kim Rodrigues February 1, 2022 at 5:14 AM Thank you SuZ!

Christuraj Alex January 31, 2022 at 8:28 PM Great triolet. Dream is beautiful .Congratulations! Kim Rodrigues February 1, 2022 at 5:13 AM Thank you, Christuraj!

Caren Krutsinger January 31, 2022 at 6:49 AM There is such an imaginative beauty to this one; your imagery and words of gorgeousness make it ever so delicately pleasant. Kim Rodrigues January 31, 2022 at 8:18 AM Inspired by a painting by British artist Peter Nixon. :) Thank you, Caren!

Sai Lin Lip January 30, 2022 at 6:33 PM People like to dream, as though everythings are possible and obtainable, of course in their dreams. Chinese says you dream(daydreaming) in the day and you'll dream in the night. A great dream. Kim Rodrigues January 31, 2022 at 8:18 AM Ooh…that is an interesting insight! Thank you!

Gershon Wolf January 30, 2022 at 12:39 PM I have never seen a tri-dancer and it is highly probable that I never will, but Now I can picture one thanks to your talented pen, Kim. Thank you. Dance to Daylight, Gershon Kim Rodrigues January 30, 2022 at 1:36 PM The artist shows three of the same dancer. That is what I’m conveying here :)

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2022 at 10:04 PM Fantastic imagery, KIm. i would not be surprised to see this on the winners' list. Kim Rodrigues January 30, 2022 at 4:00 AM Thank you so much, Andrea! xx

Valerie Staton January 29, 2022 at 6:15 PM Beautiful imagery Kim! Nice flow. So comforting. Kim Rodrigues January 30, 2022 at 4:01 AM Thank you, Valerie! :)

Bill Baker January 29, 2022 at 1:44 PM I love the motion is this fine Triolet, Kim. The imagery is lovely. Have a great day! Bill Kim Rodrigues January 29, 2022 at 6:04 PM Thank you, Bill! :)

Vijay Pandit January 29, 2022 at 1:28 PM Enjoyed the beauty and sound of your poem, Kim. Painting and music! Kim Rodrigues January 29, 2022 at 6:04 PM Thank you, Vijay! :)