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Starlit Dream

The lyre and moonlight cascading. Tri-dancer transposes shadow. On tiptoes, gracefully gliding, The lyre and moonlight cascading. The artist’s pen twirling, shading His starlit dream…a stellar show. The lyre and moonlight cascading Tri-dancer transposes shadow. 1/29/2022

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Debra L Brown

Date: 2/12/2022 12:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Kim. Blessings ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2022 2:26:00 PM

Thank you, Debra!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 2/1/2022 4:46:00 AM

A dance of words so beautiful and cascading. Congratulatiions. SuZ

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2022 5:14:00 AM

Thank you SuZ!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/31/2022 8:28:00 PM

Great triolet. Dream is beautiful .Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2022 5:13:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/31/2022 6:49:00 AM

There is such an imaginative beauty to this one; your imagery and words of gorgeousness make it ever so delicately pleasant.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2022 8:18:00 AM

Inspired by a painting by British artist Peter Nixon. :) Thank you, Caren!

Sai Lin Lip

Date: 1/30/2022 6:33:00 PM

People like to dream, as though everythings are possible and obtainable, of course in their dreams. Chinese says you dream(daydreaming) in the day and you'll dream in the night. A great dream.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2022 8:18:00 AM

Ooh…that is an interesting insight! Thank you!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/30/2022 12:39:00 PM

I have never seen a tri-dancer and it is highly probable that I never will, but Now I can picture one thanks to your talented pen, Kim. Thank you. Dance to Daylight, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2022 1:36:00 PM

The artist shows three of the same dancer. That is what I’m conveying here :)