Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

Starlight Kiss

Awaiting faraway soul to guide fate the star shooting fireworks
catching one's breath destiny will spread this heart's wings 

To fly free with the spirits loving pure this is how one sees a dream unfolding 
wrapped up warmly inside treasure life growing stronger pure

With an amazing vision awakening sunshine just to see love happy 
surrounded by beauty always gentle humble and meek an angel sings

Oh I have walked the beach on a cold frosty moonlit night 
stars silver jewels as the moon smiles howling over and back 

A soul searches to find that one in a thousand dream whispering waves
blushing clouds swept away carried within warm wings kissing beats

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Sharon Gulley May 26, 2015 at 12:58 PM Love the imagery and sweetness in this write Liam. Awesome starlight kiss.

Meg Anderson January 30, 2015 at 10:59 PM This is wishful and lovely. Beautiful pen Liam! Liam Mcdaid February 6, 2015 at 1:23 PM meg thank you kindly dear pal for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you Liam Mcdaid February 6, 2015 at 10:54 AM meg thank you kindly dear pal for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you

Constance La France January 30, 2015 at 10:57 AM Liam your words flowed like waves, beautifully, well done and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~ Liam Mcdaid January 30, 2015 at 1:23 PM a pleasure reading your work dear friend thank you kindly truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Laura Breidenthal January 30, 2015 at 12:58 AM Your poetry is always beautiful and uplifting. I enjoyed reading your verse tonight... so lovely... Always, Laura Liam Mcdaid January 30, 2015 at 2:09 AM thank you so kindly laura wonderful comment deeply appreciated bless you dear friend

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 29, 2015 at 11:04 PM Great couplets liam. god bless>rajat Liam Mcdaid January 30, 2015 at 2:02 AM thanks rajat dear pal smiling bless you

Alesia Leach January 29, 2015 at 7:32 PM Wonderfully illustrated. I had beautiful vision floating in my mind ;0) Liam Mcdaid January 30, 2015 at 1:47 AM alesia thank you kindly for the truly beautiful comment bless you

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2015 at 1:57 PM gorgeous lines, Liam. I enjoyed the read. Liam Mcdaid January 29, 2015 at 5:17 PM thank you andrea so sweet deeply appreciated dear friend

Dorian Petersen Potter January 29, 2015 at 12:18 PM Hi Liam! Very beautiful pen Liam! I really enjoyed reading your very sweet love poem my dearest friend. Very enchanting piece about awakening visions and unfolding dreams . A very romantic and magical poem to be held close to ones heart.smiling.I'm so very touched by it. You're the Romantic Poet! The best! Always believe in you!Your pen is truly golden! I love it! A huge 7 +++ from me! Have a very lovely day! God bless you always, give you His peace and keep you in His light! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxoxo D.^O^" Liam Mcdaid January 29, 2015 at 5:16 PM thank you dorian dear friend for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2015 at 5:00 AM - On my wings I fly with your beautiful words - In our dreams, nothing is impossible :) - A touching and beautiful poem Liam - I wish you a lovely day :) - hug // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid January 29, 2015 at 5:11 AM thank you anne lise dreams is all one has in the end your a true friend bless you wishing you a beautiful day