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While starlight peeps through frames of my window Adorning blossoms with graced loveliness; I swagger in the yard to watch a glow Luminescent as eventide’s caress, That my eyes wander like a rosy dream Captive by the dance of tranquility; Where jays skitter on blazed feathers, upstream Mirroring twirls from heart’s gaiety, While Summer’s reflects fiery skyline To touch this mystic heart of providence, As Orlons of wishful trail entwine This glint imbues a Magi's innocence ; For lustrous pleasures lift my cheeks, to rise To fall asleep, draped in starlight’s warm bliss; And trace moments of heavenly surprise Humming bird songs from night's lullaby kiss! For White Wolf's Starlight Contest Revised 4/17/2017

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Date: 4/20/2017 1:47:00 PM
Great write Nette! Congratulations on your win! :-)
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Date: 4/20/2017 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Nette, great write ! Hugs dear friend
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Date: 4/18/2017 8:14:00 PM
Congrats to you on your win in my contest, Nette!
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Date: 2/3/2016 3:17:00 AM
Nette, Congrats on your wonderful win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/2/2016 2:56:00 AM
Lovely piece I really enjoyed especially the second read
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:00:00 AM
What a pleasure to read dear nette.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 1/27/2016 1:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/27/2016 12:01:00 AM
NETTE, Congrats on your Simple Pleasure win. Hugs ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/26/2016 3:41:00 PM
A beautifully descriptive write, Nette! Has a magical feeling to it. Congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for participating! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/24/2016 8:50:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, Nette. Gentle and beautifully written it fits the them well.
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Date: 1/23/2016 3:02:00 PM
- Enjoyed your beautiful poem, Nette - Have a great weekend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/22/2016 9:25:00 AM
Stargazing is a wonder! Dazzling poem which makes me feel I am in the sky!
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Date: 1/22/2016 7:37:00 AM
Very beautiful Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/22/2016 3:17:00 AM
Nature is magic wearing reality's gown. Blessed the one who its magic enjoys, dear nette! Magical !
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