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STARLIGHT

Starlight breathing soft, spilling its silver hush, gathering the night into wonder~ Light born.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Gauthier Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 5:45 PM
Beautiful ~
Wolf Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 9:46 PM
'gather the night into wonder' - Sigh... ~ Gershon
George Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 9:32 PM
Beautiful image and a lovely Cinquain! Your night looks a real wonder.
Rolland Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 4:42 PM
so beautiful poem, always looking at stars for inspiration, or God, thanks poet sara
DiMino Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 11:42 AM
I never get tired of stars. God's wonders of the night. Lovely write.
Ashley Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 8:54 AM
Dear Sara, I adore the soft quality of "s" sounds for your alliterations and tender "starlight" imagery. The fourth line offsets the "s" sounds so wonderfully. The last line twins beautifully with your first for a classic cinquain. Warmest wishes and hugs, my sweet poet friend.. ~Susan
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