Starlight

sky with no starlight vast universe of darkness without a twinkle

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Date: 3/27/2021 9:34:00 AM

That would be pitch dark or almost. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats. Sara

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 3/29/2021 5:54:00 PM

Thank you Sara, for your kind comment. Glad you enjoyed it. So nice of you to mention my visit.

Date: 3/27/2021 6:04:00 AM

So true. Great emphasis at the end of the haiku ..without a twinkle. Well done :)

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 3/29/2021 5:52:00 PM

Thank you Heidi, my favorite line.

Date: 3/27/2021 3:08:00 AM

How empty the universe would look without stars. Hope you're well Sandra Tom

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 3/29/2021 5:51:00 PM

I think of how beautiful the night sky appears with all of those heavenly bodies. So sad without. Thank you Tom, hope all is well.

Date: 3/27/2021 1:50:00 AM

Charming, Sandra ~

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 3/29/2021 5:49:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by and commenting, Line.