Starlight

What a glorious sight those shooting stars
Taking their potshots at the Planet Mars
Perhaps I am wrong
It could be a bong
From the wife when I get home from the bars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Proxenos Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 1:38 PM
Hi Rico, A night out with the boys maybe, a loving wife waits! Yasou Jennifer
Braithwaite Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 5:43 AM
I see!
Ashley Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 10:43 PM
Haha! I love it, Rico. A brilliant and witty limerick. Enjoyed! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Leffanta Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 5:07 PM
Thank you for making the time to comment! Aloha! Rico
Jordan Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Wonderful and so funny Rico!
Leffanta Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 3:51 PM
If you have ever seen a Scottish housewife fling her skillet (or my mother with her rolling pin) you would know how easy it is to see shooting stars in broad daylight! Aloha! Rico
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