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What a glorious sight those shooting stars Taking their potshots at the Planet Mars Perhaps I am wrong It could be a bong From the wife when I get home from the bars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Date: 11/14/2018 1:38:00 PM
Hi Rico, A night out with the boys maybe, a loving wife waits! Yasou Jennifer
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Date: 9/16/2018 5:43:00 AM
I see!
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Date: 9/12/2018 10:43:00 PM
Haha! I love it, Rico. A brilliant and witty limerick. Enjoyed! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/17/2018 5:07:00 PM
Thank you for making the time to comment! Aloha! Rico
Date: 9/12/2018 4:24:00 PM
Wonderful and so funny Rico!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/13/2018 3:51:00 PM
If you have ever seen a Scottish housewife fling her skillet (or my mother with her rolling pin) you would know how easy it is to see shooting stars in broad daylight! Aloha! Rico