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Starlet Lullaby

Blue hour silhouettes materialize Broadway starlets are dreaming Lullabied by the sun

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Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Date: 5/26/2015 4:46:00 AM

A vivid and colorful haiku, love the thought and arrangement. ~~~Cynthia

MD Johnson
Date: 5/26/2015 11:52:00 AM

Thank you for the very nice compliment Cynthia BuhainBaello.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/16/2015 4:00:00 PM

this is charming Michael I love the soothing imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

MD Johnson
Date: 4/17/2015 11:16:00 AM

Your comments are always very kind. Thank you for reading my first kimo effort.

Sulakshana Bhattacharya

Date: 4/16/2015 2:21:00 PM

Never heard of this form before, but the poem is so beautiful and simple. Loved it M.J!

MD Johnson
Date: 4/17/2015 11:12:00 AM

This was my first Kimo. I think it is one of my better efforts to date. I'm happy you found it enjoyable.

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/16/2015 12:24:00 PM

Great! I like the "starlets all went dreaming...lullabied by the sun". 7 for your kimo, Michael. Smiles from the isles! :)

MD Johnson
Date: 4/17/2015 11:14:00 AM

My first kimo effort. Happy you enjoyed and thank you for the 7.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/16/2015 11:42:00 AM

- A lovely kimo poem, Michael - // Anne-Lise :)

MD Johnson
Date: 4/17/2015 11:15:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words.