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Staring Into My Own Reflection(Inspired By Rain Cerdiwin Keetly)

if you can see into the depths of my heart you would hear it sing the saddest song for those who have looked for meaning in tragedy for those have suffered terminally for i have fallen just like them i have been forsaken i've looked into your eyes and i see my own reflection i see the tears you have cried i know you are alone and afraid your innocence betrayed but look into these eyes i have struggled and suffered just like you grab my hand you'll no longer be alone just think this through for i have fallen just like you let's stop this trend of sinking for we are not alone together we can break this threshold locked in this embrace together we will not break bound together by something stronger than super glue will you think this through? will you realize that i'm just like you? just look into this heart don't let this world tear us apart for i have suffered just like you together we shall never fall nothing can push our backs up against a wall we will break through! believe in me! i believe in you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/18/2009 9:33:00 AM
Logan....oh god....i would cut mi heart out and hand it to you...i would take your hand, and smile. your the light, im the night, but together we stand together. this is so completly beautiful. ive read it over and over and over, and it makes me cry...thank you, really thank you so much. this is...one of the most touching and beautiful things i have ever seen. i believe in you...this one will forever stay in mi heart. xo Raiin Keetly
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Date: 11/17/2009 5:43:00 AM
Thank you for starting my week out with some excellent reading Logan. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2009 1:07:00 PM
Wow that is a great poem. Lovely dedication. Lovely wording to. Keep up the awesome work. -Courtney
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Date: 11/16/2009 12:15:00 PM
A good dedication for a great writter and person as well deep emotion here good jod in this write
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