Staring

` Yeah, you caught me staring at you But I couldn't help myself I'm addicted to beautiful

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/29/2019 3:54:00 AM

I cannot blame you, my friend! Beauty is to be appreciated and shared. Regards // paul

Chris Green
Date: 9/30/2019 8:30:00 AM

Thanks so much Paul.

John Hamilton

Date: 9/28/2019 12:47:00 PM

I think us men are addicted to beauty, I think it's in their jeans! lol

Chris Green
Date: 9/30/2019 8:30:00 AM

Ha, I think you are right. : )

Hello There

Date: 9/27/2019 6:44:00 PM

Oh, gosh... Chris, you are a poet, for crying out loud ~ you can do better than this one-liner... LOL. Cute ;)

Chris Green
Date: 9/30/2019 8:30:00 AM

Just having some fun my friend. : )

Debra Squyres

Date: 9/27/2019 5:20:00 PM

I remember hearing words like these many, many... who's counting? ... years ago. Made me smile... thanks !!

Chris Green
Date: 9/30/2019 8:29:00 AM

Thank you so much Debra

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/27/2019 4:20:00 PM

well it is ok to admire beauty right? as long as it didn't make her feel uneasy i am sure it made her smile...short, to the point but it paints the picture nicely... love this...your muse always delivers! hugs :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/27/2019 4:45:00 PM

: ) One of the perks of the business.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/27/2019 4:36:00 PM

lol...true guys work in garages but sometimes us women need to bring our cars in...sometimes dressed for work in heels and skirts...

Chris Green
Date: 9/27/2019 4:28:00 PM

It was just a thought I had, there really wasn't any her, I work in a garage with a bunch of guys. (Ok, now that didn't sound right) : ) Thank you my friend. Can you see my smile from there?

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/27/2019 2:21:00 PM

Wow! Now this is the way to woo a lady! Excellent writing, Chris. Love, Carolyn

Chris Green
Date: 9/27/2019 2:29:00 PM

Ah, just one of my standard pick up lines. : ) Just kidding. Thanks so much Carolyn.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/27/2019 12:56:00 PM

lol. Good one Chris. 2nd laugh you have brought me today :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/27/2019 1:22:00 PM

Thanks so much Heidi. Glad you got a chuckle out of this one. : )