Stargazing

I gaze upon the velvet sky
Where stars are just a flicker to the eye
 One seems brighter than the rest
 Perhaps it's Mercury, glowing in the west

 Venus too is seen above
 It twinkles like the god of love
 Each star I see leaves me in awe
 Was that Jupiter I just saw?

 Closer yet is the silver moon
 In crescent mode or shining full
 It conducts the celestial tune
 The boundless sea feels its pull

 The night sky is full of wonder
 Its awe and beauty makes us ponder
 On the splendour of the universe
 As through the galaxies the stars disperse 

 4/17/17
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Lindley Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 5:44 AM
LOVE THIS STAR GAZING POEM. Closing stanza especially good.. Good luck in that contest. A7
Hoffman Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 9:10 AM
Awesome points of the night sky in this stargazing poem Joseph! G/L in the contest!~Che :)
Vaso Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 8:18 PM
I dont know why, but for some reason, I always love poems about the stars, the galaxy and the heavens!!! :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 7:03 PM
Wonderful, Joseph! Good luck in the contest.
Pettit Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 5:04 PM
I agree with what Phil has stated.
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April 17, 2017 at 5:03 PM
Good one Joseph, good luck in the contest.
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