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Stargazing

I gaze upon the velvet sky Where stars are just a flicker to the eye One seems brighter than the rest Perhaps it's Mercury, glowing in the west Venus too is seen above It twinkles like the god of love Each star I see leaves me in awe Was that Jupiter I just saw? Closer yet is the silver moon In crescent mode or shining full It conducts the celestial tune The boundless sea feels its pull The night sky is full of wonder Its awe and beauty makes us ponder On the splendour of the universe As through the galaxies the stars disperse 4/17/17

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Date: 4/21/2017 5:44:00 AM
LOVE THIS STAR GAZING POEM. Closing stanza especially good.. Good luck in that contest. A7
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Date: 4/20/2017 9:10:00 AM
Awesome points of the night sky in this stargazing poem Joseph! G/L in the contest!~Che :)
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Date: 4/17/2017 8:18:00 PM
I dont know why, but for some reason, I always love poems about the stars, the galaxy and the heavens!!! :)
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Date: 4/17/2017 7:03:00 PM
Wonderful, Joseph! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/17/2017 5:04:00 PM
I agree with what Phil has stated.
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Date: 4/17/2017 5:03:00 PM
Good one Joseph, good luck in the contest.
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