Sara Kendrick Poet Free verse

Stardust Swirling

Swirling, spiraling universe
Stardust in galaxy submerse
   

Coat me in refined stardust
Brightest star afar entrust

Contended with His Divine Love
In Seventh Heaven above  

Swirling, spiraling universe
Stardust in galaxy submerse  

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Contest: Stardust In An Octella
Written this Wednesday, July 10, 2013
Poet: Sara Kendrick

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Kelly Deschler August 13, 2013 at 2:54 PM Very nice poem, Sara. Very expressive imagery! Well done! I felt like I was inside of a dream world as I was reading this. By the way, thank you for commenting on my poem "Heaven For A Poet". And, I am glad that you enjoy my work!

Anne Rutherford July 30, 2013 at 6:06 AM Delightful poem Sara, I'm so glad it won. xxoo Anne

Skat A July 18, 2013 at 10:22 PM Hi Sara, I love your star dust winning poem. Congratulations! Luv* SKAT

Nette Onclaud July 16, 2013 at 3:53 AM twirling with grace, sara.. congrats on your win in my contest... do check my blog!..:) huggs

Richard Lamoureux July 15, 2013 at 9:27 PM I like the way you layed out your poem, intresting to look at and read. Congratulations.

Shadow Hamilton July 15, 2013 at 7:13 PM hi Sara great poem congrats shadow x smiles

Bl Devnath July 13, 2013 at 9:11 AM Very nicely penned about the stardust. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Debbie Duncan July 12, 2013 at 11:59 AM This is very nice Sara ,,,, I hope you win with it ;}

Russell Sivey July 10, 2013 at 7:09 PM You have written a fabulous entry into Nette's contest! I love the way you put the poem together, a very nice way to put Him into this subject, I really enjoyed reading it this evening! What a glorious piece, such a lovely poem, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 10, 2013 at 12:38 PM - Beautiful contest poem, Sara ! - Nette will love it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)