March 30, 2926
For the contest "Stardust Serenade' by Robert James Liquori
As night softly nudges dusk aside and birds return to their nests to hide I look skyward in hopes of a chance to see you among their nightly dance The stars are magic, but I need you the way you once were: a dream come true I hear wind singing our lonesome song And wonder again how things go wrong If I could hold you just one more day dance with the clouds our magical way But, our days have become lost in time and, only in dreams will you be mine The stars sense dawn is now drawing nigh they persuade wind to lighten the sky Then Breeze, that often tells silken lies, Will tell our secrets to lilac skies
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