Stardust On the Wall

I cannot fault my destiny
As the candle I awaken with my fire
Burns with flames enkindled by desire
To an end I cannot see




July 29, 2019
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Ashley Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 11:22 PM
Your poem is absolutely beautiful, Lonna. I love the emotion, the imagery and your awesome title. Stunning and stirring poetry. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 6:36 PM
I relish your touching and heartwarming words, Lonna, and truly appreciate the depth of your kindness.. thank you, my friend.
Blodgett Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 2:14 PM
I love your writing!!! This is a comment I will relish. I thank you! Lonna
Gauthier Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 9:02 PM
Love your poem, Lonna.
Blodgett Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 9:08 PM
Line.....I really appreciate all of your wonderful encouragement. Thanks so much
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