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Stardust of Wonder

Sieved stardust of wonder fell
                from heavens above
              as we foxtrotted under 
          a charmed moon at twilight.  
                    A kaleidoscope 
         of mesmerizing sights abound. . 
                Bright stars were out
                     by the billions! 
          We lay supine and watched 
             one dart across the sky.  
         Then we attentively listened
         to songs of the hermit thrush 
                    while savoring
              the refreshing night air. 
                  We were blissfully 
                 serenaded to sleep!


Date written: 06/15/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 6:36 AM
This is absolutely gorgeous Edward! Stunning imagery and mesmerising emotions. Congratulations on your win. :) I wish it got a higher placement. This is an instant fave for me!
Ibeh Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:29 PM
Thank you so much for the positive feedback, Aditi:-) I greatly appreciate the fav, my friend!
Mitra Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 10:39 PM
Such gorgeous words... your words sieved all our restless thoughts ,...only peace remains
Ibeh Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 5:40 PM
Thank you so much, Debjani:-)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 10:27 PM
Ahhhh music and the stars how romantic. This is beautiful Edward. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo
Ibeh Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 5:41 PM
Thank you very much, Connie:-)
Bangalee Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 2:27 AM
we listened to lilting songs of the hermit.... nicely shared; feel pleasure here
Ibeh Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 6:34 AM
Thank you, Mahtab:-)
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