Stardust of Wonder

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Sieved stardust of wonder fell from heavens above as we foxtrotted under a charmed moon at twilight. A kaleidoscope of mesmerizing sights abound. . Bright stars were out by the billions! We lay supine and watched one dart across the sky. Then we attentively listened to songs of the hermit thrush while savoring the refreshing night air. We were blissfully serenaded to sleep! Date written: 06/15/2020

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/22/2020 6:36:00 AM

This is absolutely gorgeous Edward! Stunning imagery and mesmerising emotions. Congratulations on your win. :) I wish it got a higher placement. This is an instant fave for me!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/22/2020 1:29:00 PM

Thank you so much for the positive feedback, Aditi:-) I greatly appreciate the fav, my friend!

Debjani Mitra

Date: 6/19/2020 10:39:00 PM

Such gorgeous words... your words sieved all our restless thoughts ,...only peace remains

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/20/2020 5:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, Debjani:-)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/19/2020 10:27:00 PM

Ahhhh music and the stars how romantic. This is beautiful Edward. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/20/2020 5:41:00 PM

Thank you very much, Connie:-)

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/15/2020 2:27:00 AM

we listened to lilting songs of the hermit.... nicely shared; feel pleasure here

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/15/2020 6:34:00 AM

Thank you, Mahtab:-)