Stardust Artist

Virgin snow sparkles in the darkest hour
as stardust dances with celestial power.
Silently it rains upon mother earth
giving witness to such an idyllic birth. 

A fawn and doe now break the glaze
like tiny spoons upon crème brulees. 
Below Polaris they prance and snort,
for they seem to know the time is short.

For such a night is a rare event,
as blue light above is heaven sent.
Wondrous luminescent tranquility
trumps any earthly poet’s ability.

Now the first rays pierce the frigid night
and Orion’s bow soon fades to light.
White carpet dulls now without the luster
of a nocturnal painter, the starlight duster.

James Nichols 12/29/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Duncan Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 4:19 PM
I love your stardust poem,congratulations on your awesome win ;}
Guzzi Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 3:12 PM
I loved the referrances to the names of the stars. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Nichols Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 9:09 PM
thank you, Debbie!
Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 1:56 PM
Very expressive and creative work that is in the winners' list..Congrats on your win...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
Nichols Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 2:08 PM
thank you so much!
Johnson Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 8:03 PM
This is lovely James. One of my favorites of the group. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Nichols Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 2:09 PM
I appreciate it very much!
Haick Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 12:56 PM
James! This is very beautiful! This is the second poem I've read that I would have placed higher, but we all have different ideas of what we look for in a poem. Anyway, you know as I that this is awesome! Always, Annalise
Nichols Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 2:10 PM
such a subjective thing judging poetry is. I am honored to even be on the list, places aren't important. I've written long before I was entering contests, and I'll write after them as well. It's all fun and good!
Squyres Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 11:39 AM
ohhh myyy !! How beautiful !! These verses flowed so easily into my mind. It's art you have written here with your pen...congrats on our shared spot in the winners list !! You are a very talented poet.
Nichols Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 2:11 PM
that is very sweet of you to say! I really appreciate the feedback.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 2:34 AM
Congratulations James xx
Nichols Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 2:13 PM
thank you!
A   Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 9:14 PM
James, beautiful. Congratulations in Gail's "Blanket of Stardust" contest. :-). Have yourself a goodnight~LINDA
Nichols Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 2:08 PM
greatly appreciate the kind words!
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