Stardust Artist

Virgin snow sparkles in the darkest hour
as stardust dances with celestial power.
Silently it rains upon mother earth
giving witness to such an idyllic birth. 

A fawn and doe now break the glaze
like tiny spoons upon crème brulees. 
Below Polaris they prance and snort,
for they seem to know the time is short.

For such a night is a rare event,
as blue light above is heaven sent.
Wondrous luminescent tranquility
trumps any earthly poet’s ability.

Now the first rays pierce the frigid night
and Orion’s bow soon fades to light.
White carpet dulls now without the luster
of a nocturnal painter, the starlight duster.

James Nichols 12/29/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/12/2013 4:19:00 PM
I love your stardust poem,congratulations on your awesome win ;}
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Date: 1/24/2013 3:12:00 PM
I loved the referrances to the names of the stars. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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James Nichols
Date: 1/24/2013 9:09:00 PM
thank you, Debbie!
Date: 1/24/2013 1:56:00 PM
Very expressive and creative work that is in the winners' list..Congrats on your win...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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James Nichols
Date: 1/24/2013 2:08:00 PM
thank you so much!
Date: 1/23/2013 8:03:00 PM
This is lovely James. One of my favorites of the group. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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James Nichols
Date: 1/24/2013 2:09:00 PM
I appreciate it very much!
Date: 1/23/2013 12:56:00 PM
James! This is very beautiful! This is the second poem I've read that I would have placed higher, but we all have different ideas of what we look for in a poem. Anyway, you know as I that this is awesome! Always, Annalise
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James Nichols
Date: 1/24/2013 2:10:00 PM
such a subjective thing judging poetry is. I am honored to even be on the list, places aren't important. I've written long before I was entering contests, and I'll write after them as well. It's all fun and good!
Date: 1/23/2013 11:39:00 AM
ohhh myyy !! How beautiful !! These verses flowed so easily into my mind. It's art you have written here with your pen...congrats on our shared spot in the winners list !! You are a very talented poet.
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James Nichols
Date: 1/24/2013 2:11:00 PM
that is very sweet of you to say! I really appreciate the feedback.
Date: 1/23/2013 2:34:00 AM
Congratulations James xx
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James Nichols
Date: 1/24/2013 2:13:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 1/22/2013 9:14:00 PM
James, beautiful. Congratulations in Gail's "Blanket of Stardust" contest. :-). Have yourself a goodnight~LINDA
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James Nichols
Date: 1/24/2013 2:08:00 PM
greatly appreciate the kind words!
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