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Star Trek Comparison

Jean-Luc Picard cant replace James T. Kirk

                       with his Earl Grey tea and sinister smirk,

he lacks Jim's youthful physique,

                       that made women's knees go weak,

and acts more like a Shakespearean jerk.


(Limerick)


04/02/2022


On A Lim Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May
"Star Trek"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 1:09 PM
This is a really good one. I am having fun reading all these limericks. Congrats, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 8:37 AM
Thanks, Andrea, I don't usually write Limericks, but it's all in fun...nothing serious, my friend, Emile.
Macfarlane Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 11:37 AM
Hahaha, terrific limerick and win. Hugs
Pinet Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 3:46 PM
Thanks, Cecilia, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Miller Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 7:06 AM
Very well done, Emille; congratulations.
Pinet Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 8:38 AM
Thanks, Terry, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
May Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 6:25 AM
Captain Kirk and Spock were the dynamic duo, Very nicely done Emile, Congrats on your win
Pinet Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 8:37 AM
Thanks, Joseph, I appreciate both the placement and your comments, my friend, Emile.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 4:30 PM
Hello Emile, I like James T. Kirk. i had a crush on him for a long time. Enjoy your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 12:44 PM
Hello Emile, I had a crush on Picard. Yes it slowly did lose its appeal. Yes Picard is still good. Your friend Darlene
Pinet Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 7:49 AM
Thanks, Darlene, the show chose brains over muscles and it lost some of its appeal, although Picard is still pretty good, my friend, Emile.
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