Star Talk, Shadow Walk

next time you look at those twinkles in the night sky
and sigh, there'll be a glimmer in your eye ...

what if light is the language of Star
and Star is the language of night
and night is the feeling of ineffable space
where the infinite writes insight,

with plasma roiling from its transmuting pen
into particles 'n photons that zeal;
that seems to me, to be so very real ...

then our shadow we see,
slow diving on the ground,
is a reminder of the night we carry,
everyday around


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on journaling: if you don't know where you've been, you'll not see where you are and can't
get to where you ought to be - the transmigration of writers is with ink - then there are
curious circles that fill our days and when we write them out and really look and see, a
turn of phrase that changes us conceptually, as the circle becomes spiral, a vortex to the
sky, where the Stars of hope wink 'n blink, and beckon us to fly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/5/2009 10:14:00 PM
Very nice poem...Enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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Date: 12/5/2009 4:28:00 PM
What ifs going through your head and then you write them down to try to figure them out is an excellent journal. I am sure that there will be some answers that pop up. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/5/2009 4:14:00 PM
Wow! I love this poem, and this way of looking at things....provocative poem, and added comment on journaling. I like to keep my thoughts open ended to the mysteries that we will not ever understand. ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/5/2009 3:19:00 PM
I really like it and we are of like minds Please read The Root, the Tree &, the Branch Line 5 "inefable"..perhaps if it's a couplet it should be presented in pairs of 2? Light & Love
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