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5/31/25

My Seven Words Used

Cascade
• Myriad
• Serpentine
• Slither
• Lunar
• Nebula
• Phosphorous

Star Studded Night Myriad stars like tiny jewels greet me as I set up my telescope a new moon was the current Lunar cycle, no light to interfere Ophiuchus the Serpentine constellation Slithers across the sky trailing Phosphorous dust in its wake I train my scope on the pinwheel shaped Andromeda constellation its spiral arms reaching far out to space the Helix Nebula comes into view its brilliant colors from a shrinking star a Cascade of meteors from the Perseid shower cap off my night with a glorious display streaking across the dark sky.

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Date: 6/14/2025 6:32:00 AM
Creative lines penned in this winner. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/14/2025 8:02:00 AM
Thank you Sara. Glad you liked this
Date: 6/12/2025 6:57:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Oliver! Imagery is amazing.
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/12/2025 7:15:00 PM
Thank you. Astronomy is sort of a hobby for me.
Date: 5/31/2025 11:17:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Star Studded Night" write/story. Telescopes can be a ton of fun. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful/blessed weekend writing away..................
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/31/2025 11:56:00 AM
Thanks Paula. Appreciate your comments

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