Star Spangled

Here I am darling 
at the center 
of my everything,
gazing over a lake
looking upon 
silver stars lovingly
dancing inside ripples.

Sparkling in 
a moving mass
kisses gently ,
touching deep waters,
blinking diamond thoughts
upon a moon face,
reflections flooding 
through the mind 
every last one shines
sweetly on 
you my love.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hicks Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 11:54 AM
I clicked on your poem thinking I was going to read a patriotic poem - my country's national anthem is called Star Spangled Banner. I love the diamond thoughts part... for that's what I really of them as. Thoughts are priceless :)
Mcdaid Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 12:28 PM
smiling timothy wonderful comment bless you
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 9:52 PM
somebody's getting some love action for writing this piece!!!!:)
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 2:39 AM
- Soft and loving words to your loved ones - Beautiful poem, Liam - Wishing you a lovely Monday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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