Star Spangled

Here I am darling 
at the center 
of my everything,
gazing over a lake
looking upon 
silver stars lovingly
dancing inside ripples.

Sparkling in 
a moving mass
kisses gently ,
touching deep waters,
blinking diamond thoughts
upon a moon face,
reflections flooding 
through the mind 
every last one shines
sweetly on 
you my love.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/24/2014 11:54:00 AM
I clicked on your poem thinking I was going to read a patriotic poem - my country's national anthem is called Star Spangled Banner. I love the diamond thoughts part... for that's what I really of them as. Thoughts are priceless :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 12:28:00 PM
smiling timothy wonderful comment bless you
Date: 8/27/2014 9:52:00 PM
somebody's getting some love action for writing this piece!!!!:)
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Date: 8/11/2014 2:39:00 AM
- Soft and loving words to your loved ones - Beautiful poem, Liam - Wishing you a lovely Monday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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