Star Reverie

Star Reverie

Seeds of stardust gather into
A holy crucible , birthplace,
Creation’s crystals of clear dews.

Celestial reveries ring out
Their birth song lingers in deep space
When stellar joy sings with a shout.

A medley of neon rainbows
The Creator’s sparkling showcase
Garden galaxies, God’s hand sows.

Through astral winds of cosmic fire
No hand of sin touches their face
Pure blessing light from each transpires.

Every star born with unique traits, 
The sparkling stars enshrine their place
Their starry magic, contemplate.

Each night they see the face of God,
Eternal signatures of grace,
Then send prayers of praise and laud.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 8:04 PM
Congrats on the winner list. You chose a sweet topic with stars . Lovely, fitting title
Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 12:26 PM
I am seeing your name on Joanna's winners' list. Congratulations! Way to go. Sara K.
Kauffman Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 11:28 AM
Hi Sara! Thank you! I love to sit quietly and stargaze. They seem to sing to me. Sending you my gratitude and continued prayers!
Poet Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 2:10 AM
Beautifully crafted work with fantastic layers of imagery. Congratulations on your contest win, Dear Sam.
Kauffman Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 11:27 AM
Dear Lasaad, stargazing is an experience of music and harmony for me. They are such a unique, integral and glorious part of creation, truly reflections of our creator. Thank you for your sparkling feedback that twinkles like the stars for me. Sending you blessings!
Daniel Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 12:03 AM
Sam, thank you for participating in my contest:) the syllable count placed this low or it would have gained a higher spot:)
Kauffman Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 10:16 AM
Hi Joanna! Thank you so much for this wonderful contest and for your placement! I thought I had carefully checked the syllable count. Sigh! I so appreciate this placement in spite of my goof! Sending you blessings of starry nights!
Hind Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 10:18 PM
awww lovely, Sam!! <3
Kauffman Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 11:51 AM
Thank you Paige! I have always been enchanted by a starry night filled with stars! Blessings to you!
George Avatar
July 10, 2026 at 11:12 PM
'A holy crucible, Creator's sparkling showcase, garden galaxies'- wonderful word combinations..! Your poem, altogether is a delight to read. l am drawn by the 'stellar magic' in the night sky and in my ears, the 'stellar joy sings with a shout'. A beautiful poem, dear sweet Sam.
Kauffman Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 11:50 AM
Dearest Valsa! Thank you! What a joy it is to revel in the beauty and the magic of the galaxy. And, what a joy it is to view it together. Sending you blessings of beauty dear friend!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 4:08 PM
I agree...your poem is soul and elegant...faving.
Kauffman Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 11:16 AM
Hi Sara! Thank you! Your fav is a beautiful blessing. Truly each star reflects and is a reflection of it's divine creator. And, how blessed are we to share in that beauty each clear night. Took awhile to write this, get my thoughts organized, but I love the way ti took shape. Blessings in starlight to you!
Kingston Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 6:02 PM
This would make a beautiful sermon or a special hymn Both lovely. I enjoyed your beautiful images as I read.
Kauffman Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 11:11 AM
What a wonderful idea, Marikate! I'm so happy you enjoyed this "song!" Thank you for your ideas! Didn't think about either option when I was writing. So good to hear from you. Hope all is well. Sending you blessings!
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