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Star Party

At the beach of Coney Island IHere in Brooklyn - home of the Brooklyn Cyclones I attended a star party with some friends Gazing through the telescope I saw the rings around one of the solar system giants Felt a bit dwarfed by the immensity of space But recovered with a cup of green tea Made in China where they have a space program as they do in Israel Even though it is the land of the Bible

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/26/2012 6:39:00 PM

Oh, I LOVE LOVE LOVE the destroyer! I've messed up on words like that so many times, or called someone by the name of the poet I'd read before. This time though...I was thinking you'd seen something with green teats in the telescope. Sounds kinda scary, if you ask me! Have a great night, Mikki

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/21/2012 12:49:00 PM

Interesting write... Takes us arond the solar system and the planet... Cool.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2012 9:44:00 PM

Matt, a cup of green teanice nice.... nice image to acompany the view of the solor system, with a green teat..love it.. have yourself a good night~ always*PD