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*Image of Star of David by ClipArt. Star of David
Ah!
These
stars, for
they all seem
to wedge the whole
nighttide tract of our perpetual sphere's vaulted ceiling, that
lingers on their ambiguous tethered strings, consumed
by a grand dark expanse beyond where imagination
lays their vast secrets, and inspirations dares a
peek, while aspirant souls ventures a quest to
scope a noble claim, and bestowed a fame but,
beware for a twinkle will cause one to blink, for 'twas
an alternate reality, one that is earthbound perchance be a
different sort of star
'twas saved, dates
from past, a gift
be his name
David,
EL 2019 May 10 *1st Place* A Brian Strand Visual ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 March 01

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 3/3/2022 12:23:00 PM
This is awesome! “ for 'twas an alternate reality”. Congratulations on your First placement. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 3/3/2022 1:06:00 PM
Connie, 'tis the chicken or the egg came first, and we've always known the answer to be the Creator! Gratitude's extended truly, Aloha~William
Date: 3/1/2022 11:20:00 AM
Awesome beautiful careful built concert verse, William. Congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend
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Date: 3/1/2022 1:18:00 PM
The physical and the metaphysical indeed addressed, Eve, kind regards for your laudation my friend, Aloha~William
Date: 3/1/2022 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a wonderful write and shape. Love It. Have a blessed day with your win...................
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Date: 3/1/2022 11:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paula, and as always may your day be blessed my friend, Aloha~William
Date: 6/27/2020 6:06:00 PM
Hi William. Just want to pitch in - content of this Davis poem is phenomenal. Several plus magnificent sounding word combinations. Gripping, you create very tangible scenarios from an ethereal concept. Star format makes this egsample shine and shout your genius.
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Date: 6/27/2020 7:18:00 PM
My heartfelt thanks indeed my dear, Jasmine, for your gratuitous sharing -- Aloha~@wk
Date: 5/12/2019 1:30:00 PM
How about entering this in the 'ethereal' contest? It certainly is in the cosmic realm! Nice one, William. ~ gw
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/12/2019 1:41:00 PM
Too many first prizes in a day, tho' thanks a whole lot for taking the time to comment, let alone read them! Aloha wk
Date: 5/10/2019 11:06:00 PM
Beautifully executed, William.
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Date: 5/10/2019 11:19:00 PM
Much appreciated! Aloha wk
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