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*Image of Star of David by ClipArt. Star of David Ah! These stars, for they all seem to wedge the whole nighttide tract of our perpetual sphere's vaulted ceiling, that lingers on their ambiguous tethered strings, consumed by a grand dark expanse beyond where imagination lays their vast secrets, and inspirations dares a peek, while aspirant souls ventures a quest to scope a noble claim, and bestowed a fame but, beware for a twinkle will cause one to blink, for 'twas an alternate reality, one that is earthbound perchance be a different sort of star 'twas saved, dates from past, a gift be his name David, EL 2019 May 10 *1st Place* A Brian Strand Visual ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 March 01

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/3/2022 12:23:00 PM

This is awesome! “ for 'twas an alternate reality”. Congratulations on your First placement. Blessings xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/3/2022 1:06:00 PM

Connie, 'tis the chicken or the egg came first, and we've always known the answer to be the Creator! Gratitude's extended truly, Aloha~William

Eve Roper

Date: 3/1/2022 11:20:00 AM

Awesome beautiful careful built concert verse, William. Congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/1/2022 1:18:00 PM

The physical and the metaphysical indeed addressed, Eve, kind regards for your laudation my friend, Aloha~William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/1/2022 8:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a wonderful write and shape. Love It. Have a blessed day with your win...................

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/1/2022 11:01:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paula, and as always may your day be blessed my friend, Aloha~William

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 6/27/2020 6:06:00 PM

Hi William. Just want to pitch in - content of this Davis poem is phenomenal. Several plus magnificent sounding word combinations. Gripping, you create very tangible scenarios from an ethereal concept. Star format makes this egsample shine and shout your genius.

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/27/2020 7:18:00 PM

My heartfelt thanks indeed my dear, Jasmine, for your gratuitous sharing -- Aloha~@wk

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/12/2019 1:30:00 PM

How about entering this in the 'ethereal' contest? It certainly is in the cosmic realm! Nice one, William. ~ gw

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/12/2019 1:41:00 PM

Too many first prizes in a day, tho' thanks a whole lot for taking the time to comment, let alone read them! Aloha wk

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/10/2019 11:06:00 PM

Beautifully executed, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/10/2019 11:19:00 PM

Much appreciated! Aloha wk