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Star Magnolia

Star Magnolia in the winter cold Can you give me any hope to hold There on your branches, buds of silver In this cold, I feel them shiver But they are giving me a shred of hope That soon spring will surely kaleidoscope

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Joshua Lacey

Date: 1/27/2010 4:10:00 PM

great way of putting that hope will come out of almost any problem, :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/25/2010 6:45:00 PM

Wonderful words so brilliantly placed in your couplet poetry... lovely visual picture... luv.. Linda-Marie..

James Fraser

Date: 1/25/2010 2:20:00 PM

With spring around the corner, spring poems will be springing up, and i hope they are as lovely as this one >> James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/25/2010 1:59:00 AM

This is a beautiful spring poem, Sara. Magnolias are beautiful. Love to you. Dane Ann

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/24/2010 2:48:00 PM

We are all waiting for spring! The buds of Magnolia give aus hope! Nicely written Haiku, Sara! Thank you for yor commenting Black Cat...Gert

Nicole King

Date: 1/24/2010 11:25:00 AM

this is very beautifully written. i love the flow. it's very hopeful...nikki

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 1/24/2010 5:05:00 AM

Lovely Sara , spring is hope eternal thanks Daniel

Kim Hilliker

Date: 1/24/2010 12:38:00 AM

I'll take hope anywhere I can get it. Nicely written. Thanks for sharing.

Brian Strand

Date: 1/24/2010 12:38:00 AM

Sara thank you for your welcome commnts today.The poulter's measure in its longer form is 12:14:12:14 etc etc Rgds Brian.Habe s good day.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/23/2010 4:12:00 PM

Spring always brings us hope, Sara. This is a very touching poem that makes me long for spring and its beautiful "kaleidoscope." Great work! Love, Carolyn

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/23/2010 3:49:00 PM

Thank you for everything.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/23/2010 1:39:00 PM

Lovely Couplet and one of my favorite shrubs. Mine grew so big I had to remove it as it was growing onto the road and becoming a beautiful hazard. Thank you for your comments on my entry in Matt's contest. Love, Joyce

Simone Segal

Date: 1/23/2010 12:48:00 PM

Lovely poem, and thank you so kindly for your comment, love Simone

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/23/2010 12:48:00 PM

First of all love the title that alone catches my attention, a beautiful poem here and have a great weekend. :)