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Star Light

high on life the tippy top a star aglow Dayspring of everything a candle lit timeless and perpetual the earth received HIS great worth placed in a mother’s embrace a babe how dare we lick our fingers and extinguish eyes so bright as if we alone could create a star of our own ^ < > V small ones we are 0 seen 0 from heaven’s gate 0 angels 0 preview our nods and knees 0 do we 0 follow through as the years go by 0 do we 0 steeple or fold our hands 0 and 0 ponder our destiny star light drips from the candle on high do we catch the flame

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Date: 12/21/2023 3:25:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Kim :) - Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones :) - hugs
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Date: 12/20/2023 4:51:00 PM
imaginative poem with a creative design and a brilliantly crafted poem. I especially liked do we steeple or fold our hands and ponder our destiny" Well done, Kim. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 12/20/2023 12:16:00 PM
Creative design of this starlit poem. Much enjoyed the hues you convey, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/20/2023 4:09:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 12/20/2023 7:10:00 AM
Beautiful, Kim; great poem for the season and all seasons. You get a FAVE from me. Blessings. Have a wonderful Christmas.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/20/2023 11:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Joe!
Date: 12/20/2023 7:02:00 AM
Beautifully created Kim, thought provoking too. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/20/2023 11:12:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 12/20/2023 6:25:00 AM
Oh my, this is such a deep and insightful poem dear Kim! I absolutely love your wordplay here, so unique and whimsical, compelling the reader to ponder upon these thoughts.. An impeccable wordsmithery you've presented in this one and I love your presentation as well! "star light drips from the candle on high do we catch the flame" Ahh, just so brilliantly crafted..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/20/2023 11:13:00 AM
Thank you, dear one!

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