Star Fairy

Star Fairy

Not found in dim pastimes of the hopeful, 
nor water, or mellow adventure.
Your essence is a  rose
turned toward the sun.
Your magic, a free line drawn
from heart, to rainbow,
to living echo.

 7/22/2015
 For Andrea's Shweet Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 9:00 PM
Delightful poem, SuZ ~
Inman Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 8:02 AM
Beautiful Suzanne.
Delaney Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 11:43 AM
Thanks James:)
Zubair Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 3:19 AM
Yes we should think nice to make it feel right. The rest will all come in its own time
Mays Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 10:28 PM
Wow! Wonderful! So aptly and beautifully written.
Lindley Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 10:09 PM
Wowser! This is a magnificent write! Congrats on your win!
Leiser Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 2:35 PM
Congrats on your win, Suzanne :)
Nance Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 1:41 PM
Oh nicely said, from heart to rainbow, a living echo, I love that!
Richards Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 10:32 AM
Oh this would be perfect to tuck into a valentine !! Love it so much!!
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 4:13 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
A  Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 3:46 AM
Suz, Congratulations on your Win. **SKAT**
A   Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 2:56 AM
Hi Suz, stunning imagery. I like the nonstop feeling of magic. Always loving your poems.... A sweet win..... Love LINDA
Carter Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 1:02 AM
Love the title ! Such a sweet poem, congrats on your win! ~lee
Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 12:07 AM
Suzanne, I really appreciate the simplicity of this little gem. Congrats in my contest!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 12:06 AM
Wonderful imagery Suzanne ! Congrats on big win!
Horsman Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 3:35 PM
This is sweet and so visual, with a hint of classical..just love it....
Ryerson Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:15 AM
WOW, what a marvelous picture you've painted here Suz...'Your essence is a rose turned toward the sun.'...Beautifully done! I think you've got a winner here - Tim
Delaney Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 2:23 PM
Hi Tim: Nature and magic always come easily into my poems, So glad you visited to brighten my day. SuZ
Guzzi Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 7:48 PM
I've missed you! Light & Love
Delaney Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 11:45 AM
thanks Debbie I missed you, too.
La France Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 5:07 PM
Suzanne, Sweetly penned 7 , lovely and thanks for visiting my poem, the butterfly and dragon
Delaney Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 5:25 PM
Thanks Constance; The pleasure was all mine. SuZ
Duncan Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 8:56 PM
Love it ;)
Delaney Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 12:50 PM
Thanks Debbie: So good to hear from you af gain. SuZ
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 5:58 PM
beautiful imagery Suzanne good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 12:58 PM
Oh what a wonderful idea Suzanne! Hugs Jan xx
Delaney Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 12:56 PM
Thanks Jan: This is what's known as a paperbag poem. You write a lot of words on little bits of paper. Then put them in a paperbag and shake them up. Draw out 5 words and write a poem with one word being in the title. A fun exercise SuZ
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