Star Duster

I fear that you don't love me so, 
And it scares me so much. 
You are the most precious person to me, 
And I love you a whole bunch. 
It's so hard to confess. 

I escaped with a single bound over the dream. 
To a huge star burning bright. 
But I realized that 10 thousand year old star, 
Was too far ahead to lead as a light. 
Please help me. 

Give the love now, 
Give the love to me, 
Give the love please,
And you'll see
My love. 

I try to open these heavy eyelids, 
But all I meet is the inky darkness. 
I can't feel your presence, 
That sent me to bliss. 
I wanna feel your warmth. 

The love is slowly disappearing
As I attempt to recapture it. 
It flowed away to the horizon 
100 million years ahead, bit by bit. 
I need you 

Give the love now, 
Give the love to me, 
Give the love please,
And you'll see
My love. 

My senses completely freeze, 
And I try to breath in, 
But this temperature is somehow 
Comforting, like I win. 
Your love returns. 

The star may not shine on the outside, 
But it has a ruddy light in the inside. 
I can see that light, and I'm not afraid
To love you, and I'm dyed 
With your love. 

Give the love now, 
Give the love to me, 
Give the love please,
And you'll see
My love.

That light will never be swallowed by 
The darkness that may live within. 
Even when the light is dim, 
It burns bright on my skin. 
Let me embrace it. 

I'm searching for that glow 10 thousand years ahead alone, 
And even though I'm disappearing in this space dust, 
Before I fade away, 
Your love is a must. 
I love you. 

Give the love now, 
Give the love to me, 
Give the love please,
And you'll see
My love.

I'll see you soon enough, 
Now that this million year old star 
Has burned it's love away. 
Love you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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