Star Dust

Star Dust
			By Elaine Roy

Lost in your eyes, as they glitter and seem to turn into stars.
I'm hoping to make a perfect wish, so that my love falls, and doesn't miss  your heart.
My love for you, shines as bright as the Northern lights
May my love fall, like a shooting star, to find it's way into your heart.
Shall my love find it way to reach your heart, before it burns out!
It doesn't take much to reach for hope; when it lies inside of a heart that you want to call home
Why does love lose it's star dust and find it's self shatter into lost particle of space , that once gather to create such a amazing star
I'm hoping that it does this, so it can take all the star dust of our love emotions and joint two stars, like us. So, together we create a love,that evenually becomes our brighten sun!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/5/2014 12:15:00 PM
Many congratulations Elaine xx
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Date: 2/5/2014 12:16:00 AM
IT impressed me too and congrats on the win, elaine
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Date: 2/4/2014 1:49:00 PM
The late Hoagy Carmichael wrote a hit song with the same title. Your poem has given his song some competition. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/15/2013 7:28:00 AM
Almost like the nicest dream .... beautifully written Elaine. - Have missed you, welcome back. - - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/12/2013 8:55:00 PM
ooooo and ahhhh !! Love the love shared with the stardust !! Creating a star of love to settle in a heart..two becoming one....How magical !! Enjoyed !!
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