Star Dreams

A feather star 
begins dancing 
softly it moves 
in current feelings 
within the deep 
blue ocean 

singing out 
in emotions 
craving food 
it desires 
waves touching song 
plays on pipes 
one tune 
sweetly whistles 
from the deepest organ 

under one sky 
a star falling 
trails in magic 
we dream 
the same dream 
wishing for that day 
in loves name 
we embrace together 
emotions kiss 
a dream 
that is you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Deschler Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 7:25 PM
What a lovely dream to have, Liam! This is a very beautiful and romantic piece of poetry! So well done, my friend!...Thank you for the great comments. I appreciate it very much!
Onclaud Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 1:08 PM
dreamy romace becomes you, partner... a moment that extends into life...amazing span in this piece..:) huggs
Virden Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 2:03 PM
"Emotions Kiss" Delightful read Liam
Andresen Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 10:56 AM
- Beautiful dreaming, Liam ......sweet kiss under the stars :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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