Star Does Gigging - Spoonerism Contest

the sand was squery vishy
each frain gelt ruff between my toes
Star my stog darted to dig
sand flying everywhere
my fair and hace felt like pandsaper

soon  with iii's nearly closed
into the wea I salked  
laid down to fear my clace
just as a  mail grabbed me saying
dont do it. wife is lorth living.

I looked at Star words sannot cay what i felt
no more beech four you today.

Penned 1 March 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hicks Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 10:26 AM
Wever and clitty. Great job on the title spooner :) I was curious about the triple i section? Congrats on your winning verse.
Roberts Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 6:28 PM
Haha bet your posh and say eyes, when your brain fuses you use iii's. Lol tjx for comment....Seren
A. Sharma Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 2:42 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write dear Seren..
Leiser Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 10:21 PM
Nice one, Seren! Congrats on your win:)
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Very amusing Seren congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 2:35 AM
enjoyed your spoonerism and hope i can make one as good as this, seren..huggs
Roberts Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 10:17 PM
See Nette you will lol. Once you can think of something funny....Seren
Leiser Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 12:20 AM
This was a very fun write! Great spoonerisms:)
Roberts Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 10:17 PM
Hi Laura maNy tjx
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