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Star Bright

Twinkle, twinkle little star, your light, that I can barely see, has carved a path from somewhere far, to travel through the galaxy. In cobalt seas, your eagerness has sent your light to touch my face. Caressing with a tenderness, until my heart can feel embraced. Sun passed you by, so brief a glance, refracted light against the sky. And soon I have a second chance, to search for every firefly Twinkle, twinkle little star, along with other stars that clone, your ray of starlight comes so far, the message clear, precisely honed. It hurls through space, with news to share. With constellations telescoped. They rise up from a heaven's core, and bring to earth a glimpse of hope I'll gather up your brilliant hues. A starlight garden for my view, and thank you for the promised news. I'll wait here, 'til the morning dew
___________________________________ For Kelly's Contest: Twinkle Twinkle, Little Star 4/23/15
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Roper Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 3:25 PM
Wonderful poem congratulations on your wonderful win a 7 :~) hugs <3
Gorelick Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 1:56 PM
Wonderful work Carrie, congrats on a big win. BG
Haight Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 8:30 AM
Wonderful imagery and inspirations in your lovely twinkle poem, Carrie. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
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May 9, 2015 at 7:52 PM
Carrie, Congratulations In Kelly's "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" contest. ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 6:40 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your Twinkle Little Star win. SKAT LOVE
Allison Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 3:28 PM
So beautiful and uplifting congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Deschler Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 12:37 PM
I loved this uplifting write, Carrie. The imagery is just fantastic! Congrats on a first place win!
J.T. Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 2:05 PM
Nice and the best of luck to you -J.T.
De Paz Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 11:21 AM
Very good indeed. Good luck with contest
Stoner Jr Avatar
April 23, 2015 at 4:45 PM
Nice write Carrie, much enjoyed, good luck in the contest.
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