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Star Baby Lullaby

See me baby
My eyes gather teardrops so quickly
Each tear the lost perfect in me
I am blinded by expectations 
Only you can help me see
Baby, the brightness you retrieve 
Is the gift that I receive 
From your luminosity 

“My shining starlight 
Always guiding me
Yea yea”

Nothing, nothing

with you baby can compare
Within my soul and eyes I see
 You meet all my expectations 
only starlight sets me free

For Geraldine Taylor’s Shining Starlight Contest.

 
Thanks for the inspiration. I hope I understood the rules. I looked at this from a parent’s perspective. Our children help us travel beyond this realm. “Star light, star bright, first star I see tonight!” Our children are the stars we wish upon.

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/5/2019 5:44:00 PM

Hi Richred, this is such a beautiful song. Your words touch the heart with such a gentle joy, stirring deep the emotional pool within the heart. Well Richard, I hope this excellent write did well for you in the contest. It reads like a winner to me, my friend. Have a wonderful Wednesday when it comes. Blessings....Mike. A fav

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/6/2019 9:32:00 AM

Thanks Mike. ;0)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 8/30/2019 5:11:00 AM

Rick I really enjoyed reading/singing this! Lol I read to a little beat it flowed so well! Very nice!;)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/30/2019 2:03:00 PM

Nah see Rick I can not carry a tune for my life! Trust me if I sing it's best done all alone! Lol!;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/30/2019 10:32:00 AM

Thanks Brenda, be sure to send me a recording. Hugs Rick.

Ann Foster

Date: 8/3/2019 9:52:00 AM

A beautiful piece. I enjoyed this read. I hope you won. It deserved it... lovely. Ann

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/3/2019 9:57:00 AM

Thanks Ann, so glad you stopped by.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/2/2019 11:22:00 AM

Hi Rick, - becoming a parent makes us realize how wonderful life is and how do others we wonder, choose not to have children - the joy and harmony they bring to a home is simply non comparable to anything in life. A wonderful poem - good luck in the contest, for me this is a win! Hugs, Jennifer.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2019 12:13:00 PM

Thanks again Jennifer. Hugs Rick.

John Hamilton

Date: 5/23/2019 9:13:00 AM

Great phrasing Rick loved the line the gift I receive from your luminosity, and many more. Congrats on a fine placement...did you know you're a songwriter?

Wendy Watson

Date: 5/22/2019 2:20:00 PM

I thought it was a given that we were supposed to make the words tally with the melody though this was not always the case. You, however had good lyrics and also achieved this criteria,Richard. Congratulations on your win and I really appreciated the explanation you provided alongside the poem.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 5/21/2019 9:06:00 PM

Congratulations, Richard on your win. Great lyric, touching.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/22/2019 6:13:00 AM

Thanks Roy.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/16/2019 10:42:00 AM

Lovely... sweet. Starlight always bring joy. Thanks for the visit. I hope I can do some writing next week. I have to give in grades for the 5 courses I taught this semester on Monday, so I'm busy grading. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/16/2019 10:58:00 AM

Let me know when you post. It’s nice to have you back.;0)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2019 3:32:00 PM

Richard , I kind of went that same way with the theme, making the star light be from a person. Loved this, especially this line: Baby, the brightness you retrieve Is the gift that I receive From your luminosity

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/15/2019 10:44:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, good luck in the contest.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/14/2019 8:05:00 AM

Lovely, good luck in the contest

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/14/2019 8:11:00 AM

Thanks, there are 300 spots so the odds aren’t in my favour.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/12/2019 3:25:00 PM

Nicely done.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/15/2019 10:45:00 AM

Thanks Kim.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/8/2019 7:05:00 PM

Hi Rick: Your children grow up but you still love them as children; well done!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/8/2019 11:50:00 PM

Thanks Ralph.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/8/2019 5:26:00 PM

Your poetry still shine Richard, gl in the contest, have a great day

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/8/2019 11:50:00 PM

Thanks Pixie! Hugs Rick.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/6/2019 4:45:00 PM

Hi Richard, Your lyrics moved and touched me deeply. With tears in my eyes, I say well done. Nothing compares to the love a parent has for their child. In my book it's a winner. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/8/2019 11:54:00 PM

Thanks for the luck and visit Alexis.

Peter Walsh

Date: 5/4/2019 12:46:00 PM

Lovely write Rich . . . as always. True and heartfelt! I am wondering Rich if I may use some of your kind comments on poems I've written earlier? As I am publishing a poetry book of my own in about a month . . . I will understand if you'd rather not as lots of people like to remain anonymous! But here's hoping!!! lol Didn't know how to contact you but this way mate, Peter!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/4/2019 2:05:00 PM

Sure Peter, you can list me as Author, Richard Lamoureux “DUMMY, Hurtful and Healing Words”.