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While  traveling at warp speed on the Enterprise
 Captain Kirk came across a pleasant surprise
He came upon  the planet Poetron
Where the written word was spawned

So Scottie beamed him down
 To see what he could find
 The planet had a reddish brown
surface, and with letters it was mined

 The captain stepped on a vowel
And immediately he started to rhyme
But as he began to spell
The letters  turned  into slime
And   Kirk began to sink into a soupy grime

 But Scottie managed to  beam him up in time
And the captain  became a poet in his prime
Uhuru seemed to like his poetic lines
But Spock was not so inclined
And Bones thought he had lost his mind
But everything turned  out fine

Then at warp speed he headed off to adventures new
To a strange planet called Haiku

Joseph May
Theme: Kirk  becomes a poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/10/2013 10:16:00 AM
I enjoyed this one immensely, it was creative, cute and funny. Well done! Hugs
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Date: 9/8/2013 12:42:00 PM
So THAT'S how Kirk became a great poet, and now he's haikuing on Haiku? Wow...Congrats to you sir - Tim
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Date: 9/8/2013 10:39:00 AM
nicely crafted poem...cute ending...congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/6/2013 8:56:00 AM
Hello Joseph,, You Star Trek fan :-)~ , a nice and awesome win... always looking forward in reading and following all your winning poems... Luv~ LINDA
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Date: 9/5/2013 6:26:00 PM
Joseph, CONGRATS! thank you very much for this one... love your entry.... enjoy my newest poem :) ~SKAT~
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Joseph May
Date: 9/6/2013 7:16:00 AM
Thank you for my first place win in your contest Skat
Date: 8/31/2013 10:06:00 AM
let me be the first to Congrats you on winning this contest hands down! Morgan
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Joseph May
Date: 9/6/2013 7:18:00 AM
Thank you.....You were right Morgan....now I can celebrate
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/5/2013 8:40:00 PM
Ha ha ha! told you so! ! It was the fat man singing. . . ME! i am even more happy that i am right about this poem. . well you deserved it Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Joseph May
Date: 8/31/2013 10:13:00 AM
Thank you for those kind words Danesh...I certainly hope to win....but I'll wait till the fat lady sings before I celebrate
Date: 8/15/2013 2:29:00 PM
Star Trek Rules Yes !!! Very funny Joseph, I don't remember this episode lol. Take care, Richard
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Joseph May
Date: 8/31/2013 10:14:00 AM
thanks Richard
Date: 8/14/2013 4:49:00 PM
Star Trek Rules!
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Date: 8/14/2013 2:54:00 PM
this is REALLY creative. I think you did an incredible job with the challenge!
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Joseph May
Date: 8/14/2013 4:42:00 PM
thank you Andrea..cant wait to see yours...hugs
Date: 8/11/2013 6:40:00 PM
LOL! Very creative, Joseph...Truly enjoyed reading!
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Joseph May
Date: 8/14/2013 4:49:00 PM
thank you Annalise....hugs

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