Star

the person you're not is the reason for the person you are ,you're a star ,and i know your going far , see you no matter where you are , you cover up no hits but all scars from the journey of motivation thats takes you afar.
 motivation makes it , if you ever get the choice I pray that you take it , just makes sure that you date it , cause if you don't capture it the ones that hate it , is going to take it, so don't fake 
be you because that's the best that there is , live life to the fullest cause you got only one life to live, accomplish it all so you look back and say that you did , shout-out to your parents cause they made a special kid, Make a life for you and never forget that you did , 
one day you'll be monumental have your presence like a statue , be there volunterely won't ever have to ask you, focused on you won't ever look passed you , i'll write it down to remember but only if i have to, its true , you grew, like i said you a rising star but from my point of view.
so im going to need you to live your dream , be extreme, remember you're not on your own we're all on your team, right now you shining like a beam , building your self esteem , you're beautiful if you know what i mean , not just when the leaves are green, your a star never mind you're a Queen , you know what it seems, your immortal here even if you leave,

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Date: 8/6/2015 1:13:00 AM
Lexus, Enjoyed reading your poem. **SKAT**
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Date: 4/1/2015 7:29:00 AM
Good one
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Lexus Barnett
Date: 4/12/2015 11:50:00 PM
Thank you ?? I Appreciate You commenting
Date: 3/31/2015 10:19:00 PM
A great inspirational piece, It will lift your spirits if you allow it to, so I like it, a 7 for sure. God bless you from the other L.B.
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Lexus Barnett
Date: 4/12/2015 11:51:00 PM
Thank You Soo Much For Both viewing and commenting it means a lot
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