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Star

Oh joyous star You appear every night outside my window like a flickering candle Bejewelled, Beauty I cannot ignore your passionate flame begging me to Awake and Adore you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/22/2014 4:57:00 PM
adoration of a star. So nice!!
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Date: 1/22/2014 6:49:00 PM
Reads as if you are describing Sirius, the alpha star of the constellation Canis Major.
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