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Star-struck

Watching the Winter Olympics from afar I wish I were an ice-skating star To soar and twirl, leap up to the sky ~ in empty indoor rinks in July

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Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 11/17/2024 8:52:00 AM

We can always dream... Enjoyed reading your Star-struck Gershon :-D

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/14/2024 6:46:00 PM

That would be fun. If we had strength, empty rinks and the talent to reach the stars!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/14/2024 2:28:00 PM

Way to go, Gershon! Reach for the stars! A cool poem. :D

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/14/2024 12:15:00 PM

Hello Gershon , i can vision you doing the leaps and twirlsto the sky. Hyou did Great!! Enjoy your day myfriend. /Darlene/

John Read

Date: 11/14/2024 10:38:00 AM

Hi Gershon ice hockey is more your game, all that leaping and twirling is definitely not you.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/14/2024 9:09:00 AM

nice one, gershon! that's my favorite olympic sport to watch ...

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/14/2024 8:45:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun write. In hot July, I bet the cool ice rink feels good. Can we get a picture with you skating??? Please??? Have a blessed day writing away.............