standing in the corner watching ---
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Poetic Form: Senryu
Inspired: 2024 August 25
Image: N/A
paint yourself into
a corner then did you have fun
watching the paint dry
oh someone is left
outside in the cold ~ nothing
to write home about
take it or leave it
I have bigger fish to fry ~
yum trout almondine
he hit a dead end ~
no hit a brick wall crash and
burn gone down in flames
I come unstuck with
that ~ come to grief end in tears
~ he was a cold fish
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