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Poetic Form: Senryu
Inspired: 2024 August 25
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paint yourself into a corner then did you have fun watching the paint dry oh someone is left outside in the cold ~ nothing to write home about take it or leave it I have bigger fish to fry ~ yum trout almondine he hit a dead end ~ no hit a brick wall crash and burn gone down in flames I come unstuck with that ~ come to grief end in tears ~ he was a cold fish

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Date: 8/25/2024 5:55:00 PM
An interesting write that seems to pull its sentiment together at the end.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/26/2024 2:07:00 AM
My lifetime of idioms stabilized my career, thought to create a meaningful perspective, thanks Kim. Aloha William

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