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Standing Castle

The castle didn't stand because their household stood because of him. The castle didn't stand because he called them "my family", instead of "my subjects". The castle stood because he cared about what they said, felt or thought. Generations after the King was gone, the patriotic citizens still protect the castle.

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Date: 10/27/2016 5:22:00 AM
What a marvellous presentation of a true leader and how skilfully expressed, Teddy!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/28/2016 4:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for enjoying my verse, Balveen!! *^_^*
Date: 10/25/2016 10:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful metaphoric poem.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/26/2016 3:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Afzal, for your warm applause!! ;-)
Date: 10/25/2016 4:53:00 PM
So you prove how feelings can last long after the person. Congratulations Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/26/2016 3:04:00 AM
Greetings Jean!! You've summarized it very well!! Thank you so much for your applause!! *^_^*
Date: 10/15/2016 5:10:00 AM
Very good symbols and metaphors ... impressive work ... all the best ...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/17/2016 7:28:00 AM
Thank you so much for enjoying my verses, Probir!! ;-)

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