Standing Amid Thank-Fullness

To
                                                     day
                                                  I
                                               look 
                                             back
                                            and
                                             thank God
                                                for the present.
                                                  The present through
                                                       past and current
                                                          trials and
                                                              tribulations.
                                                                 Present through
                                                                   laughter which
                                                                     has become
                                                                    our strong foundation.
                                                                  To my dearest heart of hearts, it
                                                              doesn't go in vain the love you’ve
                                                        given to me.  And I myself must agree, that
                                                   as a man, I’m sincerely lucky to be me.
                                               Knowing that…When I stand…
                                          You stand
                                      then We stand
                                    becoming the
                                     singular while holding on
                                       to life hand in hand.
                                         Regretting not anew the treasures
                                           and experiences we’ve shared amongst
                                             each other with no one else
                                               to compare… And for that, 
                                                  I love you, I love you, I love you
                                                    And…
                                                       I
                                                         love 
                                                            you.




Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 8/26/2013 6:47:00 AM
This was simply beautiful! Such a wonderful way to portray thankfulness and love. I feel a peace within your words. Excellent!
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Date: 7/8/2013 8:25:00 PM
This is so lovely ink,,,, your words are magnetic!!! ~<3~ cheriex
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Date: 7/6/2013 4:13:00 PM
Love spread over time and written that way. I really liked it.
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Date: 6/27/2013 8:18:00 AM
And I love this Pace :) Hope you are doing okay! Have a fabulous rest of your week :) tc Wilma
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Date: 6/14/2013 12:14:00 PM
the shape of love carries me to feathered winds here and beyond... nice to read you again, pace.. a masterpiece!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/13/2013 10:41:00 AM
very beautiful write :)
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Date: 6/12/2013 1:27:00 PM
beautiful Pace xx
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Date: 6/6/2013 12:13:00 PM
amazing. Love it.
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Date: 5/24/2013 6:35:00 AM
airy type of structure, i see when you're alone just writhing this. love it---Elai
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Date: 5/20/2013 12:20:00 PM
beautiful Pace...absolutely beautiful
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Date: 5/20/2013 9:18:00 AM
- Hope you are doing fine, long time since I heard anything from you. - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/10/2013 8:55:00 PM
Ink, :-) I'm taking this moment to wish you an early Happy Mother's day. Just in case, I can't hang around the soup past Saturday Night. May you enjoy all the blessings a mother engraves in our hearts. About your poem: it is very special. a very nice aster feel. .. and the ending, love is playing in my mind over and over. very sweet. it was nice reading your poem.... always~ Linda
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Date: 5/7/2013 1:48:00 PM
This is very artistic . A beauty.
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Date: 5/3/2013 10:44:00 AM
this awesome!
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Date: 4/28/2013 5:46:00 PM
I give thanks with you and recognize that he should be honored. Also such creativity with the shape. I see a soul extended to the above.
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Date: 4/27/2013 5:49:00 AM
Outstanding creation of Almighty's creation, you. loved the read beautifully flow. thank you for sharing and God Bless.
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Date: 4/23/2013 12:23:00 PM
Thanking God for the present through everything in our past is important...no need to ever be angry with our trials and tribulations for they make us who we are. Thank you for this beautiful piece.
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Date: 4/21/2013 12:54:00 AM
veryy beautiful poem.loved it .have a great weekend :)
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Date: 4/17/2013 5:18:00 PM
What a perfectly awesome poem! GREAT JOB! I loved every word and the shape is really cool. So touching Pace! Always, Laura
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Date: 4/17/2013 1:16:00 PM
- I admire that .... It is beautifully written and has a nice shape - well done Ink,G, !!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 6/11/2013 9:08:00 AM
I love this poem!!! For it's sincerity & beauty in words..thanks ink....meaningful words to.meditate on and lift our spirits and to give thanks is a true blessing:)
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