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I have always been in love with the idea of love.

How the light would be brighter and skies more blue,

birds singing and flowers all over the mountains.

But then I saw you and your eyes so full of darkness

and I found comfort in the stars

and I fell for the never-ending night

and I loved the winter of your heart.

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Date: 8/24/2020 3:59:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Morgana ... I remember how exciting it was to post my first poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Morgana Moon
Date: 9/6/2020 6:58:00 AM
Thank you! Hugs and butterflies for you! <3
Date: 8/24/2020 3:29:00 AM
to love someone winter heart is a great support... Nice first post.. This was not really a contest, it was an opportunity to showcase your first poem and I am glad you entered. Thank you.
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Morgana Moon
Date: 9/6/2020 6:57:00 AM
Thank you for the opportunity <3
Date: 6/19/2020 11:42:00 AM
This is such a beautiful and stirring poem, Morgana. The reality of love can be far different from the fantasy. Exquisitely expressed. Congratulations for your wonderful placement in John's contest. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/18/2020 11:22:00 AM
Nice write Morgana, this should place higher but contest rules state minimum 10 lines, good to read the rules before entering!
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Morgana Moon
Date: 6/18/2020 2:49:00 PM
Hi John, I know and you are completely right. For personal reasons, this is definitely my favorite poem. I sorry if you felt disrespected, I didn't mean to.
Date: 6/4/2020 2:31:00 PM
Very nice, Morgana. Love does mysterious things to us. Welcome to Poetry Soup, I hope you thrive here in this supportive community ~ John
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Morgana Moon
Date: 6/7/2020 8:06:00 PM
Thank you John!
Date: 5/31/2020 10:34:00 AM
Great last line .. great poem
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Morgana Moon
Date: 5/31/2020 10:47:00 PM
Thank you!
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