Stand Up Eight

"Fall seven times and stand up eight," the old proverb sings,
A lantern lit for weary hearts with weather-broken wings.
Each stumble shapes a steadier stride, each tear a clearer view;
The strongest trees are those that learn to dance with storms anew.

I cannot choose the winds that blow nor every hill I climb,
But hope can turn the roughest road into a path through time.
When doubt declares the night too deep, I answer with one spark,
For faith remembers dawn before it brightens all the dark.

So I will rise with grateful hands, though yesterday was long;
The scars become a quiet proof that brokenness grows strong.
"When hope takes the first brave step, 
tomorrow finds the courage to follow."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 12:31 PM
I  enjoyed reading your powerful "Stand Up Eight" write. This says so much from the first line to the last line. My dad always said, Never Give Up.... Have a Blessed Day Writing Away..............................
Anaya Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 8:10 AM
Jay, loneliness, swallow-you-up feeling., so challenging, to say the least. The widower has time and only time to reflect, he may also find a new path to explore. God bless
George Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 10:00 PM
Such an inspirational poem from a soul who proceeds in life with hope and optimism even when he battles with loneliness. Love it. May it keep inspiring many more .
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 3:54 PM
Hello Jay well said. Enjoy your evening my friend. ./Darlene/
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