Stand Closer To the Mirror

I take in myself each day, 
Marks I wish to go or stay, 
For a meter away, 
Is a distance half made. 
I cannot see the beauty,
The map, of my own face. 
I hide behind distance, 
Angles, perspective, light:
As if I have something 
I wish to hide - nothing
Makes people something -
Marks gain remarks;
And bitter, empty, stark
Glances through filters
That only filter the reality, 
Of our egos fragility. 
So I stand closer to my
Mirror. And I will see by
The cracks and crevices 
Of my dead skin. Scars 
that are never to be
Deemed beautiful to
Anybody but me. 
I stand close to the mirror
And I am free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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February 16, 2018 at 9:48 PM
Fabulous first poem posted at PoetrySoup and a powerful one at that. I loved it and FAVE'd it because it's AWESOME. I look forward to reading more of your poetry, Tristan. Welcome to the PS community.
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January 3, 2017 at 5:23 AM
This could be a poem I could write. .. I absolutely love your first poem on PoetrySoup. Welcome! I hope you will like it here. Visit other poets pages and get to know us a little better. Enjoy your time here!
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