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Stand Closer To the Mirror

I take in myself each day, Marks I wish to go or stay, For a meter away, Is a distance half made. I cannot see the beauty, The map, of my own face. I hide behind distance, Angles, perspective, light: As if I have something I wish to hide - nothing Makes people something - Marks gain remarks; And bitter, empty, stark Glances through filters That only filter the reality, Of our egos fragility. So I stand closer to my Mirror. And I will see by The cracks and crevices Of my dead skin. Scars that are never to be Deemed beautiful to Anybody but me. I stand close to the mirror And I am free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/16/2018 9:48:00 PM
Fabulous first poem posted at PoetrySoup and a powerful one at that. I loved it and FAVE'd it because it's AWESOME. I look forward to reading more of your poetry, Tristan. Welcome to the PS community.
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Date: 1/3/2017 5:23:00 AM
This could be a poem I could write. .. I absolutely love your first poem on PoetrySoup. Welcome! I hope you will like it here. Visit other poets pages and get to know us a little better. Enjoy your time here!
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