Stan the Snail's Haiku

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Poem written by Gail DeBole on 11/8/2015 and updated on 6/18/2018

Lying upside down
Unaware of upside down
A gust uprights Stan

Antenna Askew
Neck stretches to the heavens
The skew is gone
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Gail Debole

Date: 11/8/2015 5:15:00 PM

Hello Jan - I am glad this made you smile. I always wonder when I post a poem what readers' reactions will be, and I appreciate your comment. I just added a second stanza. - Gail

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2015 5:19:00 PM

love the second poem too:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison

Date: 11/8/2015 4:53:00 PM

made me smile Gail:-) hugs jan xx

Gail Debole
Date: 11/8/2015 5:16:00 PM

Hello Jan - I am glad this made you smile. I always wonder when I post a poem what readers' reactions will be, and I appreciate your comment. I just added a second stanza. - Gail