Stan

There once was a man named Stan.
His rump was too big for his van.
He sat down on his couch.
It yelled out a loud ouch.
This made him feel less of a man.

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Milton Toran

July 31, 2013 at 3:12 PM

Funny, funny, funny!! A well-deserved featured writing! Congrats to you!...Milt

Tim Ryerson

July 21, 2013 at 4:47 PM

Poor couch!..Don't blame it for protesting...Hilarious limerick with correct syllable count and good meter...Congratulations Marisa - Tim

Marisa Moynihan

July 21, 2013 at 5:35 PM

Thank you, it was a fun poem to make.

Shadow Hamilton

July 21, 2013 at 2:58 AM

congrats on win Shadow x smiles

Marisa Moynihan

July 21, 2013 at 5:34 PM

Thank you:)

Andrea Dietrich

July 21, 2013 at 1:28 AM

haha, I had to chuckle reading that his rump let out the ouch. Good one, and congrats for your win.

Marisa Moynihan

July 21, 2013 at 5:34 PM

Ty :)

Marisa Moynihan

July 20, 2013 at 11:04 PM

Thank you all for the wonderful comments. Its a pleasure to have you all read my poem and to read all of yours as well. :)

Karen Anglesey

July 20, 2013 at 9:22 PM

Very funny and clever limerick. Congratulations on your win :)

Skat A

July 20, 2013 at 8:20 PM

Marisa, A good winning poem. Congratulations! with the smiles. LUV ~SKAT~

Heather Ober

July 20, 2013 at 7:18 PM

SUCH a cute, funny, clean limerick! As it should be :) Congrats on your win in my contest, my dear!

Marisa Moynihan

July 20, 2013 at 11:03 PM

Thank you for picking me. :)

Skat A

July 10, 2013 at 8:59 AM

Marisa, , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

July 10, 2013 at 8:43 AM

Hello Marisa-Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 10, 2013 at 4:05 AM

- Hi Marisa, a fun poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)