Stan

There once was a man named Stan. His rump was too big for his van. He sat down on his couch. It yelled out a loud ouch. This made him feel less of a man.

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Milton Toran

Date: 7/31/2013 3:12:00 PM

Funny, funny, funny!! A well-deserved featured writing! Congrats to you!...Milt

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/21/2013 4:47:00 PM

Poor couch!..Don't blame it for protesting...Hilarious limerick with correct syllable count and good meter...Congratulations Marisa - Tim

Marisa Moynihan
Date: 7/21/2013 5:35:00 PM

Thank you, it was a fun poem to make.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/21/2013 2:58:00 AM

congrats on win Shadow x smiles

Marisa Moynihan
Date: 7/21/2013 5:34:00 PM

Thank you:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/21/2013 1:28:00 AM

haha, I had to chuckle reading that his rump let out the ouch. Good one, and congrats for your win.

Marisa Moynihan
Date: 7/21/2013 5:34:00 PM

Ty :)

Marisa Moynihan

Date: 7/20/2013 11:04:00 PM

Thank you all for the wonderful comments. Its a pleasure to have you all read my poem and to read all of yours as well. :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/20/2013 9:22:00 PM

Very funny and clever limerick. Congratulations on your win :)

Skat A

Date: 7/20/2013 8:20:00 PM

Marisa, A good winning poem. Congratulations! with the smiles. LUV ~SKAT~

Heather Ober

Date: 7/20/2013 7:18:00 PM

SUCH a cute, funny, clean limerick! As it should be :) Congrats on your win in my contest, my dear!

Marisa Moynihan
Date: 7/20/2013 11:03:00 PM

Thank you for picking me. :)

Skat A

Date: 7/10/2013 8:59:00 AM

Marisa, , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/10/2013 8:43:00 AM

Hello Marisa-Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/10/2013 4:05:00 AM

- Hi Marisa, a fun poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)

Shirley Candy

Date: 7/9/2013 2:08:00 PM

lol...this made me chuckle.. :D

Marisa Moynihan
Date: 7/9/2013 3:01:00 PM

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/9/2013 1:49:00 PM

Aww, poor Stan. Probably more pity for his van. lol This was cute! :)

Marisa Moynihan
Date: 7/9/2013 3:01:00 PM

Thank you. :)