Stalking the Locals

On a town near the Murray
He came with a flurry,
When innocent townsfolk walked down the street,
A squawking black and white villain
With evil intentions inside him, 
Causing many a good citizen to retreat.

Known as the lament of the locals,
Very good with his vocals,
He'd strut his stuff with those unaware,
For those travelling alone
The magpie would zone,
Especially with folks with no hats looking bare.

Author's note: a magpie bird is well known for dive-bombing people's
heads--especially in the breeding season
Murray: is a well known river separating two states of Australia
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Laurie Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 8:22 PM
G'day John... for anyone not knowing the value of a swooping magpie John, all they have to do is keep their distance and be entertained all day... like we did as kids. It only lasts about three weeks though - Lindsay
Williams Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 11:44 PM
Yes Lindsay, it's great entertainment if you're not one of the victims. It is a short season, but they really do like red heads. My mate Pete will vouch for that......thanks for having a read-----kind regards----John
Merryman Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 11:20 AM
Enjoyed your poem, John. I'd hate to be one of his victims! Love, Kim
Williams Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 11:48 PM
Thanks Kim, Glad you enjoyed it......kind regards-----John
Das Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 9:24 AM
Glad that a bird is causing men to retreat. It's usually the reverse. Enjoyed this write. Excellent. #7
Williams Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 11:49 PM
A very true statement there Nandita, I hadn't thought of it that way. Thank you for your comment and your score.......kind regards----John
Nunez Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 7:36 AM
Nice write on the bird, John. I guess those heads looking bare would at least wear a wig... :-) Good evening!
Williams Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 8:03 AM
Good evening Kim, I remember when I went to college I had a red-headed friend that the magpies used to chase all the time. It was something to do with his red hair that attracted them. It made me laugh so much but it wasn't very funny for him, he started wearing a helmet. Thanks for your comment ----John
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