Stalking Moon

The pagan dark in onyx screams
as slow I walk this unclad street
in opal light of shadow dreams,
the stalking moon my frozen friend,
beneath whom all my sins portend,
until the dawn my soul redeems.

My taunting fears I cannot see,
but still I sense them 'round me traipse
somewhere on my periphery.
I waken all at once upright
as silent lays the haunting night.
The piercing moon still over me.


10/10/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodd Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 11:34 PM
OOoh! Sort of scary and foreboding. Perfect poem for the season!
Cozart Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 8:12 AM
Thanks, Gayle.
White Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 1:30 AM
As always I like the rhyming harness you put on, it runs smoothly. The subject is very familiar to me, but you have written this with so much eloquence and metaphors. I like this very much.
Cozart Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 5:26 PM
Thanks so much, Darren!
Cresswell Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 4:03 PM
Brrrr had to put another log on the fire while reading this piece. There are those dreams/nightmares that seem to be with us always. Your words reminded me of such dreams of sins unforgiven.
Cozart Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 4:54 PM
Thanks, Patricia.
Ashley Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 7:30 PM
I just love the beautifully dark imagery in your poetic nightmare Dale. Your first line is stunning and then captivating all the way through to the fantastic last line. Enjoyed! P.S. Your third line is killer too! :)
Cozart Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 8:02 PM
Thanks, Susan!
Krampe Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 5:12 PM
Your poem has an ominous atmosphere to it, great word painting, Dale.
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October 10, 2017 at 5:50 PM
Thanks, Agnes!
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 4:32 PM
such dark and sinister imagery which i find quite un-nerving and haunting Dale - very vivid description I hope I can sleep tonight!:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 5:50 PM
Thanks, Jan! I'm sure you'll have no trouble sleeping.
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